In the weekend I went pig hunting
In the weekend I went pig hunting with my dad and my puppy ted. We went to someones farm out at nelson creek they said they had pig rooting in the paddocks so went nice and early we went to the first valley i was fixing my pig hunting belt then the dogs ran up the hill and started barking dad said i bet you a deer will run out then the holding dog ran up then there was a squeal dad ran up there dad said you stay down here just encase dad said it was really big so he tried to stick it but it was to big so he shot it in the head zora the holder got ripped really bad it cost 540 dollars
Hi my name is Lucy, I'm from Hokitika Primary School. I like your story a lot, it reminds me of my little brother James and my Dad because they love hunting. Your story is very interesting but the only things I would suggest is to check for capital letters and make sure that some parts of your story makes sense.
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